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  Introduction Over the years, our editors have seen some amazing stories become dreadfully boring and some ridiculously dry topics transform into an exciting read. The culprit (or hero): writing style. Witness the advice of some admissions officers: Use a conversational style and easy-to-understand language to project a genuine, relaxed image. Make sure that your essay is readable. Don’t make us work. Give your essay momentum–make sure that the parts work together and move to a point, carrying the reader along. Don’t bore us. More often it is the monotonous style, and not the subject matter, that makes these essays dull. A large majority of the corrections made by our editors fall into one of five categories below. If you weren’t paying attention in English class, here’s a refresher: Select One: Sentence Variety Word Choice Verb Tense Transitions Essay Clichés Back to: Writing the Best College Essay

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Over the years, our editors have seen some amazing stories become dreadfully boring and some ridiculously dry topics transform into an exciting read. The culprit (or hero): writing style. Witness the advice of some admissions officers:

Use a conversational style and easy-to-understand language to project a genuine, relaxed image.

Make sure that your essay is readable. Don’t make us work. Give your essay momentum–make sure that the parts work together and move to a point, carrying the reader along.

Don’t bore us. More often it is the monotonous style, and not the subject matter, that makes these essays dull.

A large majority of the corrections made by our editors fall into one of five categories below. If you weren’t paying attention in English class, here’s a refresher:

Select One:

  • Sentence Variety Word Choice Verb Tense Transitions Essay Clichés

      	Back to: Writing the Best College Essay 
    

Sentence Variety

Word Choice

Verb Tense

Transitions

Essay Clichés

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Lesson Six: Editing and Revising

  • Lesson Six: Editing and Revising

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Andersen’s Fairy Tales: Contents

The Celtic Twilight: A Teller of Tales

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The Twelve Dancing Princesses

Current Events This Week: January 2023

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Andersen’s Fairy Tales: Contents

The Celtic Twilight: A Teller of Tales

  • Did Birds Evolve from Dinosaurs?
  • The Twelve Dancing Princesses
  • Current Events This Week: January 2023
  • African Americans by the Numbers
  • Andersen’s Fairy Tales: Contents
  • The Celtic Twilight: A Teller of Tales